1. F0F

   waiting for kr8tive comment

   Apr 29th, 2007

2. kre8tiv

   What’s the line say? Admin? is it “Step once, find all”? and “there is one address” a headline? before I comment, FOF :-) thanks.

   Apr 29th, 2007

3. a2b

   Sharp eye Kre8tive :) u r right.
   it says: “There is only one address & Step once, find all”

   Apr 29th, 2007

4. kre8tiv

   I really don’t know where to start with this one, to me it’s like a blank page. A waste of time, space and money.. Definitely not a waste of mind because there was no thinking at all.. Why would they rip-off the yellow pages? They’d not only murdered a brand but also murdered themselves. There was too much going on in this ad, (or should I say, trash).. What does a double walking-finger doing there? As if it looked like someone’s trying to pee? Logically speaking, you can’t make it with your hand and fingers. Also, The heading on the page says, YELLOW PAGE.. I mean WTF?! There’s a huge typo error on this one, If you will notice, count the pages! There are 6 pages (that includes cover & back).. WTF?! Again? LOGOS at the bottom page? They could’ve used the finger image of yellow pages and add a bandage or crutches that makes it look injured and get rid of those unwanted, exposure-hungry logos on the page because not only they distract, but they are ugly! One idea is they couldve used the original yellow pages image and rotate it verically that it shows like the hand flashing the number one.. and add the line that says, there is only one address.. endline:step once & find all. This is probably the best of the worst ads Ive seen. Period.

   Apr 29th, 2007

5. Samer

   Kre8tiv, ur over doing it my friend.. the ad is fine. it just needs a little fine tuning here and there..

   Apr 29th, 2007

6. inova8

   anyone know wht on earth does Abyat do? Do they publish the yellow book? Or are they using it to their benefit? They’re missin’ the point.

   Apr 30th, 2007

7. kre8tiv

   Samer, did u have any involvement in this ? This Ad is overdone, my friend.. I am trying to simplify it..

   Apr 30th, 2007

8. Samer

   no, i have nothing to do with it.. :)

   Apr 30th, 2007

9. indancurry

   kre8tive pare, I like your comments, but you clearly have a case of verbal diarrhoea, just like the popular RJ’s on FM 99.7 who just don’t know when to stop with the harangue.

   Anyway, keep up the good work because someone’s gotta do it, at least its you who knows the Queen’s English than the other pathetic creative morons :)

   Apr 30th, 2007

10. indiancurry

    Sorry, my nick was a typo, as Johnny Weismuller would say, me indiancurry, you kre8tive?

    Apr 30th, 2007

11. kre8tiv

    Cheers, IC… love that :-)

    Apr 30th, 2007

12. kre8tiv

    Indian Curry.. better tell some people here who Johnny Weismuller is.. and explain them the meaning of harangue.. it’s too deep for some students here to fathom..:-P

    Apr 30th, 2007

13. indiancurry

    As long as you & I understand in which jungle did Weismuller flex his muscles, its fine. Leave the baboons in the ad jungle howling among themselves :)

    Apr 30th, 2007

14. kre8tiv

    hahahaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!

    Apr 30th, 2007

15. "P"

    Well guys the series aired in 1955!!!!!! How the hell do you remember it? I had to look it up… As for the word Harangue, I guess we all have the basic English skills to know what it means. I know there are some typos done here but nothing catastrophic so ease up.
    kre8tiv… you know I enjoy your comments but try to be less pessimistic (at times, not always). I agree with you that this ad sucks but you could’ve said it in less then 15 lines or so :) I guess here’s where I should’ve used “Harangue”
    As for me (because I had to look up Jungle Jim), and as they say in French, “Je Dormirais Moins Con Ce Soir!” :)
    Cheers

    May 1st, 2007

16. kre8tiv

    Thanks for the compliment, P. But, I can’t be a lesser pessimist you know.. That won’t be me if i’d be giving nice comments to some lame student work. :-) Oh and btw, I have to elaborate when saying things here for some kids to understand it clearly:-P

    May 1st, 2007

17. Guest

    Who designed this?

    May 1st, 2007

18. Donalep

    I heared if i’m not mistaken PARAGON did it!!!
    strange we didn’t c another Press release and an award out of nowhere for it:P

    May 7th, 2007

19. kre8tiv

    Para-who?:-P

    May 7th, 2007

20. "P"

    LOL Kre8tiv!!!! But that was mean! Didn’t we agree to turn it down a notch?

    May 7th, 2007

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